I’M BATMAN

Out of all of the superheroes that you can possibly think of, there is only 1 that is, THE BEST. That superhero can only be, Batman.
Batman might not have any super powers like super strength or the ability to fly, but he does have high intelligence and hi-tech gadgets. Some of Batman’s gadgets are infa-red flashlights, tear gas pellets and more. But you can’t forget the most famous weapon of all time, the Batarang. But that isn’t the end of it. Batman can also summon his vehicles with a touch of a button. You want to go for a spin in the Batmobile, just wait a few seconds and, TA DA, you would almost be run over by the Batmoblie.
That is all of Batman summarised in less than 200 words.

2 thoughts on “I’M BATMAN

  1. You are right – this is a very succinct post. That said, you do get to the point and meet the requirements of the task. THAT said, I would really like to see more detail. Have a read of the other posts on here to get some ideas about points you could include. Some pointers: when you’re writing numbers twenty or less, write the word, not the figure (ie “one”), you don’t need a comma before “Batman” at the end of the first paragraph. You chose to write in second person, which is effectively persuasive, so well done. Just a bit more detail would improve this.

  2. This is great! This summed up batman in less than 200 words brilliantly. I agree with Ms Edwards, I believe it should have been a bit longer and a bit more detailed but other than that it was good 🙂

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